Proposed Re-Writing

In the spirit of love,

I promise to live and embody it.

There is Spirit here,

I promise to kindle and sustain it.

There is trust here,

I promise to build and honor it.

There is forgiveness here,

I promise to give and seek it.

There is hope here,

I promise to feed and grow it.

Every human being is different,

I promise to practice inclusiveness.

There is injustice throughout the world,

I promise to actively oppose it everywhere.

Communication is important,

I promise to communicate with kindness, candor, and honesty, especially with those with whom I disagree.

Everyone is suffering,

I promise to extend compassion to all in times of need.